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The Magical Whistle

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====THE MAGICAL WHISTLE===
BY -NAME AND ADDRESS WITHHELD- (Not SMB Madman, but a classmate of his from a year ago)

On a Monday morning Roberto woke up. Roberto ate his pancakes brushed his teeth, got dressed and went to his first day of second grade. When Roberto got to school he went to his homeroom, but he saw a janitors closet open and went inside of it. The door closed behind him. The closet brightened up and became a new world. It was a very bright world, with lollipops and sugarcanes. Everything was edible even the trees. There was a big river of pina colada. Roberto took a walk around. He entered a big red forest made of gumdrops and pixie sticks. He ran into another "person", he looked like a garden gnome in a Waldo costume named Felipe. He spoke Spanish just like Roberto. They became good friends and traveled the forest together. They ran into Guadalupe the pink cheetah who claimed himself as the king of the world. He told Roberto that in order to go back home he needed to complete a quest.

The quest was to go to candy mountain to get the magical whistle from Pedro the majestic unicorn. Felipe wanted to go with Roberto. The quest started as they left the red forest. They were chased by millions of miniature gummy bears. They ran for miles until they reached the maple syrup lagoon. They had to swim through the maple syrup to get to the wonderful bridge of popsicles. They were walking across the bridge and it started to melt. They fell down into the chocolate rapids where Felipe downed and was sent to butterscotch heaven. Roberto saw a twizzler and quickly grabbed on for safety. He was floating for hours and then he realized he was coming up to a chocolate fall. But luckily he had a fruit rollup parachute. He landed in a small village made up of pickle people with banana fingers. They gave him words of wisdom and taught him not to in counter any pink animals. They said that pink animals were evil, selfish, and tricky. Roberto did not believe the pickle people so he made went on with his journey. Roberto ran into a beautiful mermaid named Delores.

The mermaid was perfect except one thing - she did not have a heart. Roberto fell in love with the mermaid while she ignored him. Roberto finally got over it and went on with his journey. He needed to pass Pina Colada River. He had no boat, so he needed to make one out of lollipops. He had a very nice boat and passed through the Pina Colada River very quickly. He got on the other half of the island and found an electric scooter. He drove for 2 hours and finally hit Candy Mountain. Roberto drove his electric scooter to the top where Pedro the majestic unicorn stood. Pedro was sleeping therefore Roberto just took the magical whistle off of his tale without waking him up. Roberto began to go back to Guadalupe and he was very curious to see why the whistle was so magical. He blew it once and woke up in his bed to his dad blowing a whistle to wake him up for the first day of second grade.
This is....a.....CREATIVE story written by a classmate of mine from last year. He gave me a printed copy for some reason, and I thought I'd share it with you all tonight, because I thought more people need to read this.

By the way, I did not make any mistakes - This was rewritten from his printed copy - word for word - Thus, all his mistakes and such are kept the way it was there.
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